Mama Bear Poet Rhyme

Touch Me Like You Care

Yes we just met
The spark is there
But is it enough?
To lead any where
You touch so carefully
You do not want to frighten
I want to feel you
Let your arms tighten
Let the emotions lead us
Put your heart in your kiss
I want to know the feelings
Make me shiver in bliss
Show me that you want me
Make me know you are there
That you are really interested
Touch me like you care

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Skat A November 5, 2015 at 2:03 PM Hi Mama Bear, you have a sweet way in touching one's heart. YOU DO! that is why I am here. Something about your comment, moved me. :( Anyways, I love the beautiful feeling indeed of course in this poem. A pleasure to read. SKAT Mama Bear November 5, 2015 at 2:44 PM Thanks for the lovely words I am practiceing to be like Richard LOL with the romantic words. Blessings Edith

Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2015 at 9:48 AM Whew! Is it just me or is it getting hot in here??! Mama Bear November 3, 2015 at 1:03 PM Not sure but I'm looking for some one to practice with??? Just following your example and I get flack What is this double standards?? Just plain fun Love Mom

Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 11:33 AM Get him up and dancing and just tell him Mama bear! Hugs Jan xx Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 11:38 AM The comments jump when someone posts a comment at the same time as you are replying to the one below - simply copy the comment you made to Neva then got to your outbox and delete the comment there , then you can paste it in the right place:-) Hugs Jan xx Mama Bear October 24, 2015 at 11:36 AM You got Neva's answer instead of your own So sorry but the site is messing with my head. Good to hear from you again. Will be in touch Hugs Edith Mama Bear October 24, 2015 at 11:34 AM Nice of you to visit and leave such lovely comments I am but an amateur but like to put down stuff I am thinking. Thanks Blessings Edith

Neva Romaine October 24, 2015 at 11:32 AM Hey Mama Bear, a poem rich with hope and wondering if - and longing for. I like it very much. A deep storyline wrapped in a few words but very thought provoking. I am new to visiting with you but I look forward to enjoying more of your poems. Be Blessed, Neva

Eileen Manassian October 24, 2015 at 10:52 AM ;) Hello.....Loved this piece. Great minds think alike. I have a poem entitled Touch me like you Mean it! :) I loved this piece. So good to see you posting again....Hugs Mama Bear October 24, 2015 at 11:30 AM Will check your piece Thanks for the visit Have not felt like writing anything for a while Will be in touch Hugs Edith

Kp Nunez October 23, 2015 at 9:21 PM I feel you! This is almost like an innocent child's request yet the sentiment is certainly that of a mature person's need. This is poetry...simply stated truthful emotions. Hi Mama Bear! Hope you're keeping well. hugs! Mama Bear October 24, 2015 at 8:20 AM Thanks for the visit. Yes am feeling better after the surgery It was a long recovery though Thanks for caring Hugs Edith