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Touch Me Like You Care

Yes we just met The spark is there But is it enough? To lead any where You touch so carefully You do not want to frighten I want to feel you Let your arms tighten Let the emotions lead us Put your heart in your kiss I want to know the feelings Make me shiver in bliss Show me that you want me Make me know you are there That you are really interested Touch me like you care

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/5/2015 2:03:00 PM
Hi Mama Bear, you have a sweet way in touching one's heart. YOU DO! that is why I am here. Something about your comment, moved me. :( Anyways, I love the beautiful feeling indeed of course in this poem. A pleasure to read. SKAT
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Mama Bear
Date: 11/5/2015 2:44:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely words I am practiceing to be like Richard LOL with the romantic words. Blessings Edith
Date: 11/3/2015 9:48:00 AM
Whew! Is it just me or is it getting hot in here??!
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Mama Bear
Date: 11/3/2015 1:03:00 PM
Not sure but I'm looking for some one to practice with??? Just following your example and I get flack What is this double standards?? Just plain fun Love Mom
Date: 10/24/2015 11:33:00 AM
Get him up and dancing and just tell him Mama bear! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/24/2015 11:38:00 AM
The comments jump when someone posts a comment at the same time as you are replying to the one below - simply copy the comment you made to Neva then got to your outbox and delete the comment there , then you can paste it in the right place:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mama Bear
Date: 10/24/2015 11:36:00 AM
You got Neva's answer instead of your own So sorry but the site is messing with my head. Good to hear from you again. Will be in touch Hugs Edith
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Mama Bear
Date: 10/24/2015 11:34:00 AM
Nice of you to visit and leave such lovely comments I am but an amateur but like to put down stuff I am thinking. Thanks Blessings Edith
Date: 10/24/2015 11:32:00 AM
Hey Mama Bear, a poem rich with hope and wondering if - and longing for. I like it very much. A deep storyline wrapped in a few words but very thought provoking. I am new to visiting with you but I look forward to enjoying more of your poems. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 10/24/2015 10:52:00 AM
;) Hello.....Loved this piece. Great minds think alike. I have a poem entitled Touch me like you Mean it! :) I loved this piece. So good to see you posting again....Hugs
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Mama Bear
Date: 10/24/2015 11:30:00 AM
Will check your piece Thanks for the visit Have not felt like writing anything for a while Will be in touch Hugs Edith
Date: 10/23/2015 9:21:00 PM
I feel you! This is almost like an innocent child's request yet the sentiment is certainly that of a mature person's need. This is poetry...simply stated truthful emotions. Hi Mama Bear! Hope you're keeping well. hugs!
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Mama Bear
Date: 10/24/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thanks for the visit. Yes am feeling better after the surgery It was a long recovery though Thanks for caring Hugs Edith

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