Touch and See

When I was a boy, I wanted all the pretty toys,
So I could play and show all the boys.
I wanted all the things I could touch and see,
I would be as happy as a boy could be.

When I was a young man, I wanted all the girls,
So I could make love and touch their beautiful curls.
I wanted all the women I could touch and see,
I would be as happy as a young man could be. 

When I was a man, I wanted all the things I could get,
So I could conquer all with no regret.
I wanted to impress everyone I could touch and see,
I would be as happy as a man could be.

When I was an old man, I wanted my life I wasted,
So I could enjoy my family and things I never tasted.
I wanted everything I didn't touch and see,
I would be as happy as an old man could be.

When I was a dying man, I wanted God’s hand,
So I could go and see the Promised Land.
I wanted Jesus to touch and see,
I would be as happy as a dying man could be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Awesome poem "that defines you". A very poignant poem, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 8:07 PM
A very late thank you
Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Worth another reread. Superb.
Mcguire Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 7:40 PM
Thank you again Line
Moorman Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 1:10 PM
Tim, I was out of town I suppose when this was judged. At any rate, I overlooked it and just now getting around to congratulating you for this poignant write. As an old man now, I await and anticipate the time when Jesus will return. I'll be as you said, as happy as a dying man could be. Wonderful poem, my friend!
Mcguire Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 4:17 PM
You are right Curtis. Thanks buddy
Gauthier Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Timothy.
Faulkner Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Such a wise story of how we want different things at different times of life, thank you for submitting it to my contest!
Mcguire Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Michelle
Gondolf Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:43 AM
I really enjoyed this one, Timothy. As we get older we tend to look back on our lives a bit more. Nicely written. John
Mcguire Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Thanks John
Gauthier Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 11:37 PM
A superb poem. A FAVE with me. Thanks, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 11:41 PM
You are welcome. Thank you for the kind words.
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