Touch and Go

The girl has reached the terminal
cancer creeping within her tender lungs
the drowsy eyes decline to close 
lest the final sleep comes crawling
steals the beautiful world from her.

She hears a distant whisper wafts near
flowing on feeble breath telling the lungs
don’t give up yet, together let’s fight
construct the edifice of hope bit by bit
albeit the unsure mind can’t hold for long.

The girl knowing the battle is uncertain 
she would surely lose, tells her mother
freeze me and keep me in a cold chamber
in the frail state of suspended animation
the way you nurtured me once in your womb .

I would live within the dubious domain 
between the swathes of life and death
until they find a cure for deadly cancer
I would then sprout from hibernation
and bloom again in my beautiful garden.

April 9, 2021
Title Chosen : Touch And Go
Contest : This Or That Vol 1
Sponsor : Edward Ibeh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/11/2021 12:03:00 AM
A beautiful poem! So many young lives are lost to cancer! It is heart breaking! Cryopreservation is science fiction and who knows what future may bring. Hopefully thanks to current technology, they are finding ways of isolating and attacking cancerous cells! Pfizer are working on it. Congrats on your win. The poem flows beautifully!
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Date: 4/10/2021 4:57:00 PM
What a fantastic, moving poem, Subimal! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:23:00 AM
Powerful!
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