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As the sky turned dark The elders knew a storm was coming The totems in the graveyard were swaying To the song the wind was humming The old men could remember well The storms of long ago And they would tell the stories So the young ones would know "Don't forget," they would say Make the totems strong For they must stand forever Through all the storms that come along" When the skies cleared, the sun came out And there the totems stood Protecting those in the graveyard With the magic carved into their wood Vernette Hutcherson 8-16-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/23/2011 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Vernette. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2011 4:24:00 PM
Vernette: Congratulations on your win! Great job! Missed you while I was away my friend. Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:47:00 AM
hey Vernette congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/20/2011 1:51:00 AM
Very nice Vernette. I don't know how she chose from among all of these great poems. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:56:00 PM
Congrats Vernette on your super seventh place win in Totem contest with this wonderful write luv..
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:25:00 PM
congrats on your 7th place win in the contest Vernette, great job
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Date: 8/16/2011 9:09:00 AM
I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Vernette. Thank you so much for sharing. It is so wonderful to see you here posting once again my friend. Love, Carol
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