Totems

As the sky turned dark
  The elders knew a storm was coming
  The totems in the graveyard were swaying
  To the song the wind was humming

   The old men could remember well
   The storms of long ago
   And they would tell the stories
   So the young ones would know

   "Don't forget," they would say
    Make the totems strong
    For they must stand forever
    Through all the storms that come along"

    When the skies cleared, the sun came out
    And  there the totems stood
    Protecting those in the graveyard
    With the magic carved into their wood              Vernette Hutcherson 8-16-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Vernette. Love, Carol
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August 20, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Vernette: Congratulations on your win! Great job! Missed you while I was away my friend. Caryl Ramsdale
Williams Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 3:47 AM
hey Vernette congrats on your win David
Johnson Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 1:51 AM
Very nice Vernette. I don't know how she chose from among all of these great poems. Congratulations.
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August 19, 2011 at 11:56 PM
Congrats Vernette on your super seventh place win in Totem contest with this wonderful write luv..
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:25 PM
congrats on your 7th place win in the contest Vernette, great job
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 9:09 AM
I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Vernette. Thank you so much for sharing. It is so wonderful to see you here posting once again my friend. Love, Carol
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