Totally Invigorated

Went to the local pool for a swim last night The overpowering feeling of water was pure delight Such a simple act But energy packed Emerged invigorated, totally lost my uptight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 7:48 AM
LOL more people should follow your good example, Jack!
Cunningham Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Bet there was lots of fillies
Ellison Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Nearly went berserk!!! LOL
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August 9, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Ha! Awesome ;)) xomo!
Ellison Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 7:49 AM
The young folks looked at me and were astonished, "look at that old fart, still acting young like us guys... WOWSERS!!!" LOL XOX
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