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Totality

weighing the total sum of existence is not a skill which is given to us lying well beyond realm of human minds even those of prophets and wunderkinds requiring eternal omnipotence along with very dogged fixedness on the tracking of every single change within unending universe of strange perhaps why all the gods are too busy to notice devotees in a tizzy over all who will not follow their rules deride and treat them as self-righteous fools certainly some will call this blasphemy which should result in incapacity removal of the right to live and breathe to do any ungodly thing I please while others may react slightly more gentle needing to indoctrinate this fellow fill me to the brim with scriptures and verse before my condition becomes much worse coming right back to the totality that driving need to measure all which be inevitably to count, sift and sort that which their true religion should abort keeping it all very crisp, neat and clean creating an accounting-of-souls dream I for one have no evil scheme or wish within the sacrilegious pond to fish fully content to not bother the gods measuring of totality and odds

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Date: 8/11/2022 1:04:00 PM
Another fine poem NG, just because some people don’t bother the gods, and speak freely, should never be considered as sacrilege, but I really think sometimes you underestimate what humans together with computers and AI will achieve at some future point, if we don’t destroy ourselves in the process, I enjoyed your poem, cheers David
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