Total Surrender

Looked into her eyes

Cupid's arrows his heart found

Total surrender!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
       29 March 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Williams Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 5:34 AM
Wonderful words dear Demetrios. A7+
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Nice :-)
Trifiatis Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 1:35 AM
Thank you!
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 1:58 PM
Lovely Demetrios...
Trifiatis Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Thank you so much dear, Charlie!
Gupta Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 10:27 AM
An absolute love haiku ... Wonderful indeed !
Trifiatis Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 11:24 AM
Thank you indeed my good friend, Probir for your delightful visit and comment!
Green Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 7:28 AM
Love is just like that. Nicely done Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 11:28 AM
After so many decades on this planet I have got an idea what love is all about dear friend, Chris! Haha! Thank you so much!
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 7:12 AM
What a wise man. Well said.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 11:33 AM
How lovely to see you again dear, Scott. Thank you so much!
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