Total Lunar Eclipse

It was a magical night
The sky was lit
By the glory of Luna
The full moon
Pondering this majestic night sky
I witnessed
The total lunar eclipse
The nature's grandest spectacle
The hypnotizing beauty in action
The dazzling scene
Of the blushing bride
Luna covering herself
With the charming reddish orange veil
The spectacular alignment
Of Sun, Earth and Luna in syzygy
Breathtaking sight to behold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Docherty Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 5:04 AM
Thank you for sharing this magical moment that others can hold it in their mind also. Nice to capture those moments we might not be able to capture again, to have them recorded for a lifetime - what a joy...
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 9:20 AM
I saw one once. It was awesome. Great work describing it. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Shariff Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Sara, Thank you so much for your kind words. All the best!
Melugin Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 6:01 AM
Your descriptive diamonds dazzle as Ebony kisses the moon!
Shariff Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Chuck for your wonderful comments. All the best!
Anish Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Nice metaphor in this poem! Keep it up! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Shariff Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Matthew for your inspiring words. All the best!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 3:54 AM
I have always been terrified to watch an eclipse, fearing I might do it wrong and suffer. This poem makes it sound so delightfully wonderful I am dashing outside now to see what I can see.
Shariff Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Caren, I am so glad that you enjoyed reading my poetry. Thank you so much for stopping by my poetry page and your uplifting comments. Have a wonderful day!
Koria Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 11:58 AM
nice imagery...
Shariff Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 11:39 PM
Thank you, Jasmine for your lovely comments.
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 6:07 AM
witnessing an eclipse is a magical moment and your imagery of the event is breath taking:-) hugs jan xx
Shariff Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Jan, Thank you so much for your beautiful and kind words.
Docherty Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 4:43 AM
Beautiful vision captured - hope I'm awake to see this tonight and that the cloud cover does not spoil for us... - refreshing piece.
Shariff Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Anna-Marie, Thank you very much for your enriching comments. I certainly hope that you get a chance to witness moon eclipse tonight. All the best!
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