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Total Bliss

Have you ever walked in a dream stepping on air floating imagine this ice blue sky sapphire stars flicker bright trees alive the bark spark twigs and branches arms reaching eyes glance streams open the fish in harmony they sing imagine this bees honey always hurry steady the flow time here oh so slow snails slow come too a stop butterfly sat upon a flower a scent of a blossoms nectre imagine this beautiful in sleep total bliss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/28/2012 9:26:00 AM
This is bliss like alot reminds me of one I wrote called a state of ecstacy cool xx davidscott
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:53:00 PM
Total beauty here Dawn and I'm not just talking about your pic... Had to come and see after you commented on mine about dreams... love yours my Poet friend... luv Michael
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Date: 9/21/2012 9:10:00 PM
I like this and I can sure imagine it When you have dreams like this you don't want to wake up. Thanks for sharing and thanks for reading my poem. Lucilla
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