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Total Blackout

Eclipse of the disco ball, a full floor drank that rhythm on ice; Total Blackout; Will they get out, CAN they get out? 88 Keys to dance on, awash with a psychedelic trance; Unable to shout; Will they, can they, ever get out? Each pair of feet moving faster than the sound of the DJ; Oh that soft pout; Now there’s positively no way out; Backlit Solar sight, a beat you feel but can’t react to; Total Blackout.

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Date: 4/7/2024 8:10:00 PM
Horrific, even without a strobe light. Too many tragedies like this these days. ~ gw
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