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Tossing and Turning

tossing and turning
                                             the night seems endless and dark
                                                  light hides behind dreams


Brians Triplet contest
12/5/11

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2011

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/14/2011 8:17:00 PM Just finally going thru this older contest winners' circle and saw you scored high. A very well deserved win. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 12/8/2011 3:09:00 PM Congrats on your win, Michael! Kim Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 12/7/2011 11:56:00 AM Michael congrats on your win,love the last line..David Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 12/7/2011 11:45:00 AM congrats on your win my friend cory Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/7/2011 11:30:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest Michael. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 12/7/2011 9:53:00 AM Wonderful Senryu here Michael.Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/7/2011 12:00:00 AM Michael, that was me last night,, tossing and turning.. don't know why... but, the light has to come on.. A very good entry for Brian's contest,~ENJOYED.. thank you for sharing your wonderful senryu ;-) Have yourself a very lovely day, always,..p.d. Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 12/6/2011 8:46:00 AM This is awesome! I couldn't agree more with the title and your last line, Michael. Greatly written :) Login to Reply

Broken Butterfly Date: 12/6/2011 5:01:00 AM I think your turn in this Senryu is great. Dead stop and think. I love it. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/5/2011 9:40:00 PM wow,that last line really delivers, Michael. Keep putting out great senryu like this! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 12/5/2011 9:19:00 PM So I need to get the dream part right?? Hehe, enjoyed this gem!! All the best for Brian's contest MJF ;-) love W Login to Reply

Tracy Edwards Date: 12/5/2011 8:38:00 PM Sleepless nights suck ive had a few lately myself :) Nice write x Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 12/5/2011 8:32:00 PM Hi Michael! The last line is my favourite-- a great image! Hope this soars sky high in the contest. Thank you for all your kind comments and support on my own efforts. You're a gent! Cheers from Cyndi Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 12/5/2011 7:47:00 PM so well put.. good luck on the contest Michael and thanks for stopping by Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 12/5/2011 4:28:00 PM nicely done.. good luck in the contest. cory Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 12/5/2011 4:21:00 PM I get those nights sometimes too Michael, you describe the agony so well! Login to Reply

Dawn Mclaughlin Date: 12/5/2011 3:57:00 PM Nice Ink Michael x Thank you for your Comment on my Poem :) Dawn x Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 12/5/2011 3:38:00 PM Great write you have written here! I like how you separated the darkness from the light...the battle of reaching the dream world is ever demanding! Awesome Work!! Login to Reply

Juli- Michelle Date: 12/5/2011 3:24:00 PM I know just how you feel :) =Juli-Michelle= Login to Reply