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"The truth stood downcast in the lie" Naked, afraid of such a deed The tongue had wagged so much 'twas sore How should his adulteress proceed? As she viewed particles of truth "The truth stood downcast in the lie" For truth was ashamed to accept The fault bestowed upon itself His wife tossed carelessly aside Her feelings rubbish in his eyes "The truth stood downcast in the lie" Truth could not look straight in her eyes Eyes the window of her deep soul Would decree betrayal untold As the adulteress truly knows "The truth stood downcast in the lie"

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/1/2016 3:24:00 AM

Excellent. Well said and deep write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Jack Horne

Date: 7/30/2016 2:03:00 PM

hope this powerful write is a winner, my friend

Eve Roper

Date: 7/30/2016 12:47:00 PM

Sara, this is one great piece of writing, is amazing what the word of the Lord can touch wisdom in our souls. Thank you so very much for my placement in your contest. I truly didn't know what you wanted so I'm glad you like my write. All true of course. Hugs Eve

David Smith

Date: 7/29/2016 8:12:00 AM

You have put meaning into every line. Hello again from David in NZ

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/28/2016 10:37:00 PM

Nicely penned.....Good luck in the contest.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/29/2016 7:31:00 AM

Janis, Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate the time spent here..Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/28/2016 4:15:00 PM

Hi Sara, You haved penned a good write. I was drawn to every word. A profound sadness and betrayal spoke loud and clear. I have a feeling this write secured you a spot on the winner's list. Good luck in the contest. A big seven: -)Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/29/2016 7:30:00 AM

Alexis, Your review is very encouraging and uplifting..I am glad that you could feel the emotion that went into the work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2016 1:01:00 AM

wow, you did an amazing job using this take on the topic, Sara. I bet you will win a place.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/29/2016 7:28:00 AM

Thanks for the amazing review..Sara

Ronald Kent

Date: 7/27/2016 2:31:00 PM

Very well said, enjoyed reading your work.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2016 4:37:00 PM

Your visit is uplifting ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2016 2:00:00 PM

- A lie is hard to remember .... It is easier to tell the truth - A beautiful poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2016 4:35:00 PM

Yes, it is hard to remember the exactly things that we say so it is easy to get caught in one and hang oneself..LOL..Thanks for stopping by..Sara