Torture

Today dear wifey poo will be having cataracts removed This weenie here cringes at the thought, heartily disapproves Rather use a cane No needle that's insane To inflict this torture, surgeons are surely unmoved

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Silent One

Date: 11/21/2017 10:04:00 AM

My mum had two removed, its not as bad as it seems... I wish her a fast recovery..

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/21/2017 1:41:00 PM

This is the other eye so she knows what to expect! She's a real trooper!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/21/2017 9:18:00 AM

Tis simple enough surgery they say//To those with $$ to pay//Makes me blink//just to think//of needles and knives in the eyes at work or play. (have dodged this procedure mesef) SEE ON JACQUE SAGE!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/21/2017 1:20:00 PM

This guy will go blind FIRST!!! Scaredy cat? Yup... anything to do with cutting into the eyes! Cringing just thinking about it!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/21/2017 8:05:00 AM

Hmmm, are you sure you're not just worried about her seeing better? I remember when my grandma got eye surgery, she was so mad nobody told her not to paint her apartment those colours! ;) much love xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/21/2017 1:17:00 PM

This is her second time around... she's a pro! But that's it unless they discover a third eye somewhere!!! lol xxx