Notes About The Poem
My poem reflects the longing to find
a loved ones star who just passed away.
TORTUOUS STARS
The edge of night,
I looked for your light.
The moon not full,
the darkness so cruel.
I looked for stars,
tortured they are.
Angels slumber unaware,
Only in darkness I stare.
Will I find your star tonight,
If I pray, I might, I might.
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