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Torrents of Burning Rain

White flashes of lightning announce wild
                                                            screeches to split the air
                    Wild fire of hope
                                             smells like ozone after the rain
                                like warm sand after high tide
      Like bacon on a sandwich,
                             land on my outstretched palm.

Rolling thunder wrecks waves
     as house upon house upon tower,
          overpowering heights of blue and green
               marble like eyes when they speak fire,
                    like my hands catch deluges in May;
like wind grows fire and water at one.
     Huge orgy of rumbled up nature
          land at my useless feet.

            With tornadoes rising it up , funnels sifting  man and fish ,
                  throw me out as if my name is Jonah eaten away 
                             by guilt, swallowing fire and spewing 
                                    water soaked cooked fast food
                                        In torrents of burning rain;
                                              showers of boiling
                                                 steam curtains,
                                                   to protect my 
                                                      shivering 
                                                            self.
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Ella Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 10:08 PM
BACON! :D
Ella Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 11:34 PM
One must take Bacon VERY SERIOUSLY
White Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 10:54 PM
*nods gravely*
Green Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Seems like it is a rainy day everywhere today. I have seen a bunch of rain theme poems scattered about. Your my friend really packs a punch, I can hear your words in each crash of thunder. Really cool Darren.
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February 27, 2017 at 2:10 PM
I indeed noticed the same Chris, it's funny :) I was inspired by a painting. Really loved writing this.
Onclaud Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 1:48 PM
wow, so visual and filled with poetic impact, darren.. enjoyed the shape form too!... greeat stuff!.huggs
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February 27, 2017 at 1:57 PM
Thank you, Nette, I am glad you liked the shapes I used :)
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