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Tornado Tango

Dancing the tango
Multiple vortices twist
Rhythmic destruction

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James Fraser

September 14, 2009 at 1:11 PM

Most definately the most powerful wind section of any orchestra, and no better one than natures>>James

Veronica Joseph

July 2, 2009 at 6:14 AM

Loved this one. I can see the dancing.

Hana Ryusaka

June 19, 2009 at 4:09 PM

Awesome word choice here, Abe! I love it =)

Sandra Hudson

June 10, 2009 at 6:18 PM

Moving to the music with a rose gripped between, ..ah yes, if only I could dance. you also have soup mail my friend-AA

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

June 5, 2009 at 3:01 PM

Abe, I like your take on this one. The tango is beautiful to watch, but... You have put the actions into words perfectly. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane

Syed Amaan Ahmad

June 3, 2009 at 7:50 AM

Good one!

Charlene Bird

June 1, 2009 at 9:00 AM

Yes, the destruction of a tornado twirled into a beautiful piece of poetry.

Sue Mason

May 23, 2009 at 4:17 PM

WOW ... said alot in your haiku, Abe ... love the way you've entwined the music !! Glad you're here at the Soup!!

Izzy Gumbo

May 22, 2009 at 4:58 AM

Hi Abe - you have mail :)

Walker Neese

May 21, 2009 at 7:05 AM

awsomo

Elizabeth Neal

May 20, 2009 at 1:39 PM

Excellent description on a tornado. I just had a tornado tear throw my town not to long ago they absolutely scare me. Love Elizabeth

May 20, 2009 at 10:28 AM

What a creative slant in this poem. Good use of imagery. Enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Christopher Higgins

May 20, 2009 at 4:42 AM

Excellent brother...the last line made me smile..loved it.

Sharon Winter

May 20, 2009 at 4:25 AM

Creative and powerful scary. Well done. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

May 20, 2009 at 12:46 AM

Beautiful but deadly. Tornados are fierce and unpredictable, as you know one hit our town about a week ago. So much is still in destruction. I's still a littel shook up...Raul