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Tornado Tango

Dancing the tango Multiple vortices twist Rhythmic destruction

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 1:11:00 PM

Most definately the most powerful wind section of any orchestra, and no better one than natures>>James

Veronica Joseph

Date: 7/2/2009 6:14:00 AM

Loved this one. I can see the dancing.

Hana Ryusaka

Date: 6/19/2009 4:09:00 PM

Awesome word choice here, Abe! I love it =)

Sandra Hudson

Date: 6/10/2009 6:18:00 PM

Moving to the music with a rose gripped between, ..ah yes, if only I could dance. you also have soup mail my friend-AA

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/5/2009 3:01:00 PM

Abe, I like your take on this one. The tango is beautiful to watch, but... You have put the actions into words perfectly. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 6/3/2009 7:50:00 AM

Good one!

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/1/2009 9:00:00 AM

Yes, the destruction of a tornado twirled into a beautiful piece of poetry.

Sue Mason

Date: 5/23/2009 4:17:00 PM

WOW ... said alot in your haiku, Abe ... love the way you've entwined the music !! Glad you're here at the Soup!!

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/22/2009 4:58:00 AM

Hi Abe - you have mail :)

Walker Neese

Date: 5/21/2009 7:05:00 AM

awsomo

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/20/2009 1:39:00 PM

Excellent description on a tornado. I just had a tornado tear throw my town not to long ago they absolutely scare me. Love Elizabeth

Date: 5/20/2009 10:28:00 AM

What a creative slant in this poem. Good use of imagery. Enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/20/2009 4:42:00 AM

Excellent brother...the last line made me smile..loved it.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/20/2009 4:25:00 AM

Creative and powerful scary. Well done. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/20/2009 12:46:00 AM

Beautiful but deadly. Tornados are fierce and unpredictable, as you know one hit our town about a week ago. So much is still in destruction. I's still a littel shook up...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 5/20/2009 12:09:00 AM

Excellent Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments