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Violently rotating column of air Tornado terrifying big storm One natural phenomenon That leaves much devastation In its wide path of fury Like many people With quick tempers Who leave tears Behind Them

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Howard Kerr

Date: 3/6/2025 2:52:00 AM

Hi Sara, So grateful to you for your review of I Dived Into etc into which I invested so much of myself. I appreciate the time spent in reading this work Your superb shape poem deserves every accolade available. Congratulations to you on your achievement. Magnificent word selection in support of your contest entry based on crystal clear clarity Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/6/2025 8:19:00 AM

I appreciate the high praise, Howard. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K

Frances Schiavina

Date: 2/28/2025 3:24:00 PM

Beautifully done Sara. Sincere congratulations on a memorable winning poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2025 4:38:00 AM

Frances, thank you for stopping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 2/28/2025 4:36:00 AM

Dear Sara, beautiful metaphor. Congratulations on your win. Blessings Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2025 4:49:00 AM

I appreciate you dropping by Mulu to say congrats. Your visits are welcomed. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

David Crandall

Date: 2/27/2025 9:34:00 AM

Good metaphor. In just a short time, a lot of damage can be done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2025 4:48:00 AM

You've got that one correct, David. People can be injured or killed. A very destructive force when one comes through. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/23/2025 3:16:00 AM

I understand you have a lot of them in Texas. Pity.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 7:21:00 AM

Well, Victor, I have never lived in Texas (I see it on the news), but they do have tornadoes out there and I think quite a few in the last few years due to weather happening. I live in Georgia, and we do have tornadoes here three or four came close to our home in my lifetime but never has hit our home for which I thank God. The county has put a warning system in and a couple of years ago put one of those devices on a pole right at my home. It is needed to warn people, but they set it off every other Wednesday which is awful even with double paned windows and doors. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 2/22/2025 8:16:00 PM

The comparison at the end of the poem of tornado to the fury of men, is quite apt. Both leave tears behind. Great shape poem. All the Best dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 7:17:00 AM

Don't people who have a lot of anger stir things up, Valsa. Sometimes very hard to live with is that kind of person. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/22/2025 6:47:00 PM

Tornado destructive like many people with quick tenpers.A nice message in the poem

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 7:15:00 AM

Thank you, Akham. I appreciate the understanding. Sara K

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 2/22/2025 6:14:00 PM

Well said Sara. This is a wonderful shape poem with an excellent message

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 7:14:00 AM

I appreciate the thoughtful review, Oliver. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2025 3:29:00 PM

I like the message you gave in your tornado poem

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 7:14:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. It applies so many times in our lives. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/22/2025 2:43:00 PM

This is an awesome picture. I like the comparison of the tornado to quick tempered people.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 7:13:00 AM

Why, thank you, Hilda. It feels like a tornado when you have to live with someone like that. Sara K

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/22/2025 2:39:00 PM

Hello Sara Kendrick, wow! You must have really worked on on this shape poem. You did it very well. Enjoy your eveving my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/23/2025 9:58:00 AM

Hello Sara, Oh!!!! Okay. I like it. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 7:12:00 AM

It is an upside down Etheree form, Darlene. Thanks for the nice review and encouragement. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 2/22/2025 1:07:00 PM

Nice shape poem and analogy Sara. All it takes is a single loss of self control and people end up dead. So sad

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2025 2:14:00 PM

Yes, I agree, Tom. Today it is worse than in the past. Some people are out there just looking for a fight to get into. Thanks for the visit and nice review. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 2/22/2025 8:44:00 AM

I love the last lines the most, some people yes can be like tornadoes leaving nothing but tears behind. I love the way you’ve done this shape too! Very neat and creative. Pleasure reading your work today dear sara. Hope the weather is nice there. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2025 2:13:00 PM

It has been a warmer day today which is a good thing. The clouds are back but no rain. Thanks for the visit and the light. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/22/2025 7:34:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Tornado" write. Many people have that tornado style. Not a good thing. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away......................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2025 2:12:00 PM

I did not enter the contest that was called Shape contest though. It had already closed. Thanks for stopping by with your nice review of my work. Sara K