Notes About The Poem

Image result for pictures of tornadoes

Tornado

Violently rotating column of air Tornado terrifying big storm One natural phenomenon That leaves much devastation In its wide path of fury Like many people With quick tempers Who leave tears Behind Them
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kerr Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 2:52 AM
Hi Sara, So grateful to you for your review of I Dived Into etc into which I invested so much of myself. I appreciate the time spent in reading this work Your superb shape poem deserves every accolade available. Congratulations to you on your achievement. Magnificent word selection in support of your contest entry based on crystal clear clarity Howard
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:19 AM
I appreciate the high praise, Howard. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K
Schiavina Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Beautifully done Sara. Sincere congratulations on a memorable winning poem.
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 4:38 AM
Frances, thank you for stopping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Magdalinos Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 4:36 AM
Dear Sara, beautiful metaphor. Congratulations on your win. Blessings Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 4:49 AM
I appreciate you dropping by Mulu to say congrats. Your visits are welcomed. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 9:34 AM
Good metaphor. In just a short time, a lot of damage can be done.
Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 4:48 AM
You've got that one correct, David. People can be injured or killed. A very destructive force when one comes through. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 3:16 AM
I understand you have a lot of them in Texas. Pity.
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:21 AM
Well, Victor, I have never lived in Texas (I see it on the news), but they do have tornadoes out there and I think quite a few in the last few years due to weather happening. I live in Georgia, and we do have tornadoes here three or four came close to our home in my lifetime but never has hit our home for which I thank God. The county has put a warning system in and a couple of years ago put one of those devices on a pole right at my home. It is needed to warn people, but they set it off every other Wednesday which is awful even with double paned windows and doors. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
George Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 8:16 PM
The comparison at the end of the poem of tornado to the fury of men, is quite apt. Both leave tears behind. Great shape poem. All the Best dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Don't people who have a lot of anger stir things up, Valsa. Sometimes very hard to live with is that kind of person. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K
Singh Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 6:47 PM
Tornado destructive like many people with quick tenpers.A nice message in the poem
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Thank you, Akham. I appreciate the understanding. Sara K
Mckeithan Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Well said Sara. This is a wonderful shape poem with an excellent message
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:14 AM
I appreciate the thoughtful review, Oliver. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 3:29 PM
I like the message you gave in your tornado poem
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:14 AM
Thank you, Andrea. It applies so many times in our lives. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K
Greenhough Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 2:43 PM
This is an awesome picture. I like the comparison of the tornado to quick tempered people.
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Why, thank you, Hilda. It feels like a tornado when you have to live with someone like that. Sara K
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 2:39 PM
Hello Sara Kendrick, wow! You must have really worked on on this shape poem. You did it very well. Enjoy your eveving my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Hello Sara, Oh!!!! Okay. I like it. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:12 AM
It is an upside down Etheree form, Darlene. Thanks for the nice review and encouragement. Sara K
Empress Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 8:44 AM
I love the last lines the most, some people yes can be like tornadoes leaving nothing but tears behind. I love the way you’ve done this shape too! Very neat and creative. Pleasure reading your work today dear sara. Hope the weather is nice there. Sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 2:13 PM
It has been a warmer day today which is a good thing. The clouds are back but no rain. Thanks for the visit and the light. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 7:34 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Tornado" write. Many people have that tornado style. Not a good thing. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away......................
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 2:12 PM
I did not enter the contest that was called Shape contest though. It had already closed. Thanks for stopping by with your nice review of my work. Sara K
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace