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Torn Edges

Stars tumble from shattered edges Charter in the sounds of daybreak The other side of the planet Leave this river after a few drinks A man's teary eyes Aiming for the bright lights of the metropolis It can be seen in the distance The crane let out a screech Repairing the ripped sky
Written: March 21, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Amazing.
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March 22, 2023 at 1:14 AM
This breaks my heart, Sotto. Elizabeth
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