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Stars tumble from shattered edges Charter in the sounds of daybreak The other side of the planet Leave this river after a few drinks A man's teary eyes Aiming for the bright lights of the metropolis It can be seen in the distance The crane let out a screech Repairing the ripped sky
Written: March 21, 2023

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Date: 3/22/2023 10:43:00 AM
Amazing.
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Date: 3/22/2023 1:14:00 AM
This breaks my heart, Sotto. Elizabeth
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