Torn

when your inner self is diverse into questions left unanswered,reasons why you will not
allow your true conscious self to explore these questions, fear or acknowledgment of
confidence suppressed due to misguided strength that purposely is suppressed,this knowledge
which should only expand and not hinder,but does do to inner-self defiance one can only
conclude that they are torn.                                                             
                                                                                         
                                              Hyima chandler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 17, 2010 at 4:06 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hyima. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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November 16, 2010 at 7:51 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup..enjoyed reading your creative write tonight in poetry.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv.. be blessed this happy day ...luv..
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November 16, 2010 at 4:49 PM
Hyima, i understand when some things are not solved the right way... one can be left destroyed,,, oi! and I hate that feeling,,have anice day enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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November 16, 2010 at 2:27 PM
awesome.....i understand
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