Torn

I don't know which to choose,
Both treat me as though
I'm his queen to be.
Wish I knew which way to go,
Because now I'm a bit confused.
One says he loves 
And only wants to see me smile.
The other says he loves me,
And wants me to walk down the aisle.
But I don't know,
I'm torn between the two.
And to be honest 
I love them both,
Just don't know which
I love the most.
Hope they can understand
That they both are the better man
But right now I just didn't plan
On choosing between them both.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:17 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Jasmine. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
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October 14, 2010 at 6:11 AM
I'll bet you can choose if you put some thought into it.
Mehta Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Such is the triangle of life, always leaving you in undecided state, Jasmine
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