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Her voice resonates in my mind, No other melodious voice I can find, Her smile is an infectious delight, It accompanies me from dawn to twilight, Oh! Sail back to me my beloved, For to no other I would be involved, Hasten to come to me, Let no tempestuous sea be, I await your return, The memories of you, I can't downturn, Let’s rekindle the embers of our love, Let it come back to us like a dove, My nights have been on a bed of thorns, I haven’t had a calm sleep for once, Bring back the nights I held you in my arms, Captivate me with your charms, Let’s build a wall around us, Our love is not allowed to spin and toss. July 18, 2022, Rhyme Rumi Quote Poetry Contest, Sotto Poet.

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Date: 8/17/2022 1:59:00 PM
Thompson, oh so romantic and lovely, congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 8/17/2022 4:41:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. It's an honour.
Date: 8/16/2022 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sad when love doesn't go the way we want it to. Sara
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Date: 8/16/2022 5:11:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. Truly sad when love doesn't go the way we want it.
Date: 8/15/2022 11:32:00 AM
Her smile is an infectious delight, It accompanies me from dawn to twilight. Congratulations, Thompson!
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Date: 8/15/2022 1:18:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 8/12/2022 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful first place win with this romantic poem. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/12/2022 11:10:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. It's an honour.

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