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Torn

My life is so torn, I don't know what to do. I loved you and still do but what do I say when another female is saying that you are her man. I feel as if my soul has been ripped out and put out for the dogs to eat. All I have for you is my love and yet in the end that wasn't good enough for you. I thought that we truly had something. We shared the same interest in writing poetry, and we were both so passionate about our writings. Yet here I am today asking you the truth and all you can say is ok ok. The truth is out but let it be known that I still love you and care about you.... My heart may be torn but I guess that will be okay. Pain comes and goes but love does not.... I shall be torn until the end of time over you.

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Date: 2/26/2009 10:10:00 PM
Sounds like a heartbreaking situation indeed. My heart aches for the one that suffers this longing. Your words flow heavily with passion and desire. Great writing. Thank you for sharing. Smiles and blessings from Lolita
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