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Tormented in a pitch black room

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This is a re-edit of a previous poem, In A Dark, Dark Room.  It us for the 3-word contest.

In A Dark, Dark Room Tormented in a pitch black room-- Smelling the foulness in the ground; Flickering shadows in the gloom That feed upon me, all around Bound hand and foot, with neck exposed, Tormented in a pitch black room, I only slept, when coffins closed, With nightmares of impending doom. I heard above a muffled boom My eyes assaulted by the light Tormented in a pitch black room Never more will I fear the night I signed on with Van Helsings Free, Hunting vampires from tomb to tomb. I rescue others, lost like me-- Tormented in a pitch black room.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 1/12/2016 11:46:00 AM
Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations Mark for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:05:00 PM
Awesome win, Mark.... , Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~ :)
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Date: 1/6/2016 7:32:00 AM
Wonderful imagery! Congrats for your placement in the contest, Mark! ;-)
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:20:00 AM
MARK, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 1/5/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thanks again Skat
Date: 1/3/2016 10:44:00 AM
An amazing poem, thank you for participating in my contest! :)-luloo Be blessed
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 1/5/2016 5:39:00 PM
Thanks. Blessings back at you.