Sophia Smith Poet Personification

Tormented

Peace has gone from my heart like a thief that is lie in waiting ready to emerge from 
hiding as result leaving me frightened and confused. I am paralyzed from 
uncertainty, and my mind wonders as if I am in shocked from the sudden impacted 
from being mugged by the unexpected thief. The peace of my heart is snatched 
away without a question, if I should relinquish it or not. My heart lies naked without 
the covering of tranquility. I feel so cold and scare not knowing if my present state is 
indefinite. I am vulnerable because the secure housing of my heart is gone, and 
maybe forever. The foreboding of calamity lies at the entrance, and I am panicky 
knowing what the future entails, frighten because it has not yet unfold.

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Goode Guy June 15, 2011 at 4:50 AM sophia, you speak of torment, the anguish of the unknown. thank you for sharing your view. i believe we are all in the boat together, not knowing for sure what this day will bring. ;-)

Carol Sunshine Brown June 13, 2011 at 10:52 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Sophia. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 13, 2011 at 10:20 AM My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sophia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 12, 2011 at 10:09 PM congrats Sophia on your featured poem this week on PS. a wonderful one to share luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 12, 2011 at 3:34 PM a deeply moving write Sophia.. intricate details in this piece .. creativity shines luv..

Michael J. Falotico June 12, 2011 at 11:12 AM A very simillar theme to one I wrote a few days ago.. "A Mistreated Heart"... Yours is powerful and right on the mark... Best of luck to you....Michael