Top Ten Animals

I 
like dogs,
cats are nice,
rats not house pets.
Lizards, rabbits,snakes make me sweat and shake.
I would rather have turtles or pigs.
No hamster thou,
and no birds,
get a,
fish!



Double tetractys
top 10 contest
cory long
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/31/2011 5:34:00 AM
Nice, think you've strayed from the sylble count on the way back, enjoyed.
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:03:00 AM
thanks I fixed it :)
Date: 5/25/2011 8:22:00 PM
Dogs and cats are best! My husband has an aquarium with artificial fish that he likes to watch near the bed. haha. Last time I had fish, I somehow killed them! Anyway, nice little rundown on animals. Good luck with the contest, Cory. Good night now.
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Date: 5/25/2011 1:19:00 AM
soo playful even if you described those other icky creatures that might make you faint, carols... greeat poetic mood with winning wishes... :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:04:00 PM
This was very cute;D Good luck in the contest:)
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:32:00 PM
very cute and I luv most all your animals but the snakes and rats ..don't think so.. my sons always had hamsters when growing up.. good luck in the contest cory with this unique piece luv..
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