Cory Long Poet Tetractys

Top Ten Animals

I 
like dogs,
cats are nice,
rats not house pets.
Lizards, rabbits,snakes make me sweat and shake.
I would rather have turtles or pigs.
No hamster thou,
and no birds,
get a,
fish!



Double tetractys
top 10 contest
cory long

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Nick Bagnall May 31, 2011 at 5:34 AM Nice, think you've strayed from the sylble count on the way back, enjoyed. Cory Long May 31, 2011 at 7:03 AM thanks I fixed it :)

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2011 at 8:22 PM Dogs and cats are best! My husband has an aquarium with artificial fish that he likes to watch near the bed. haha. Last time I had fish, I somehow killed them! Anyway, nice little rundown on animals. Good luck with the contest, Cory. Good night now.

Nette Onclaud May 25, 2011 at 1:19 AM soo playful even if you described those other icky creatures that might make you faint, carols... greeat poetic mood with winning wishes... :) huggs, nette

Matt Hunt May 24, 2011 at 9:04 PM This was very cute;D Good luck in the contest:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 24, 2011 at 8:32 PM very cute and I luv most all your animals but the snakes and rats ..don't think so.. my sons always had hamsters when growing up.. good luck in the contest cory with this unique piece luv..