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'for your eyes only' Sometimes I try to figure out what is going unsaid But sometimes with the troubles I have they are better left unsaid Should I just give a card and leave well enough alone or throw caution into the wind and break my silent growns You indeed have found my full attention and with it comes good intentions but in all fairness I must first mention That a darkness is held over my commission And what is my commission ? The pursuit of one who showed a little intrest in me But if my eye's decieve me I beg that you forgive me Burn this note with all my pursuits find my flatterings of little use Please treat me with as little abuse as one who loved with little excuse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/1/2009 12:03:00 PM
I love this stanza Throw caution to the wind I love your poem Dont throw away your passion Thanks for your words on my write
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Date: 2/24/2009 12:20:00 PM
wow-- this one took off -- just right-- or just wrong but wonderfully written
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Date: 2/23/2009 8:11:00 AM
Dear John: Such a very loving and romantically written poem. Really beautifully done. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 2/19/2009 5:47:00 PM
Man is it hard to put yourself out there and get shot down or what?! Great poem man! Thank you for the compliments....always appreciated! right on write on!! Steve
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Date: 2/18/2009 9:24:00 AM
Love a be a series of mixed signals. It comes down to, if you don't try what do you have to lose. If it was not meant to be it won't be. Great write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/18/2009 12:34:00 AM
A love letter John, intriguing,& neatly done.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/17/2009 7:32:00 PM
Another great verse, John! In relationships, it is sometimes best to let go and have some things "go unsaid." But it is, indeed, perplexing when one we love gives mixed signals. Thanks for your comments on "She-Demon." I'm enjoying your work very much! Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2009 3:13:00 PM
Sometimes we may think we are reading false signals, but they are not false, just cautious...I have been here before....always, Christy
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