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Top of the World

natures monoliths so scalable is their sight will man ever rest

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Date: 11/24/2011 1:05:00 PM

You pose an interesting question at the end--I doubt if people ever really will not with things moving so fast these days. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wishing you ongoing success my friend. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 6:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest James. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:48:00 AM

James, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2011 8:40:00 AM

Congrats James on a stupendous win for these impressive Haiku lines of perfection.. very visual and photogenic piece luv..

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:53:00 AM

congrats in my contest..~LUV*SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2011 3:51:00 PM

Cool final line, will man ever rest. I wonder why haiku won't allow for punctuation because I think ! or ? do wonderfully!

James Peranteau

Date: 11/12/2011 5:42:00 AM

James my friend, this is such a great Haiku ! For one; the majestic vision one finds in this write dear poet, and secondly; I am stuck on the, 5-7-5 rendering of Haiku's. For me, the 5-7-5's require me to find, genius. You have indulged me well sir ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james

M.I.A .

Date: 11/10/2011 9:35:00 PM

A fine piece James. I kept going back and forth for that last line. thanks for your kind comments and best wishes always.

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 11/10/2011 1:18:00 PM

A beautifully crafted fine Haiku James and I love your last phrase...many thoughts run through my head as I read this. Will man ever rest, let's hope not...for a long time ahead. Interesting poetry! Thank you for you kind comments on mine!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2011 1:06:00 PM

As Robert Frost so well stated in his writing man can see the smallest things under a microscope and see the stars with a telescope but he paces back and forth like a caged bear..Very thought provoking work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

James Fraser
Date: 11/10/2011 1:10:00 PM

It's always a joy to stop by your work Sara :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2011 1:07:00 PM

James, Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/10/2011 5:37:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry and wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be James. May inspiration come into your soul each and every day. I will stop in at the Soup and see how you are doing from time to time. Love and best wishes always, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/9/2011 10:48:00 AM

I am right in the middle of this haiku mentally...I keep envisioning trying to absorb and see all that there is to see in my short lifetime...I too...will never rest. Wonderful poem. Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 11/9/2011 10:08:00 AM

An interesting take on the contest theme James.Very nice.Best wishes.