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Top of the World

woodpecker drumming echoes through a neighborhood... high rise pole dancing ................ In honor of Skat's "Top of the World" Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:43:00 AM

another nice one Carrie, , congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/16/2011 10:25:00 AM

I love this one Carrie. Congrats my dear friend. Luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2011 7:59:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on a super win for these impressive lines of expression luv.. vivid photo here ..

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:46:00 AM

congrats in my contest..~LUV*SKAT

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/13/2011 3:02:00 PM

enjoyed this Haiku, Carrie. These are difficult for me to do correctly sometimes but yours came shining through. Those woodpeckers aren't very fussy sometimes are they? must have interchangeable beaks...one for metal ..one for wood. : ) Good luck in the contest Carrie

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/11/2011 5:26:00 PM

Woodpecker drumming and pole dancing----wonderful--had a woodpecker on the tree this morning and watched him dance around the pole. cute. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2011 4:25:00 PM

Cute one..Enjoyed reading it..If the contest if still open, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the kind review of my work about the buzzards..I enjoy watching them soar..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/11/2011 12:33:00 PM

LOL You gave new meaning to the term "pole dancing" and I love your haiku, Carrie! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2011 10:45:00 AM

LOL, love this witty one! Many congrats on your wins, my friend

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/10/2011 10:32:00 AM

Great imagination in this. Love the pole dancing - so true!

Jim Wilson

Date: 11/10/2011 9:38:00 AM

I enjoyed this; it's a great image, one I'm familiar with, but you have added a touch of humor and perhaps a pun? Thanks, Jim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/10/2011 5:33:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry and wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Carrie. May inspiration come into your soul each and every day. I will stop in at the Soup and see how you are doing from time to time. Love and best wishes always, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2011 10:53:00 PM

wow! Really expensive ..image... i think this one is a masterpiece... thank you for sharing,..p.d.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2011 10:43:00 AM

This is a fantastic write Carrie! And that woodpecker is definitely on top of the world...or is it you on top of the world trying to deal with it's insidious constant wrapping! Just a thought :) Great work!!

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/9/2011 9:40:00 AM

* “Atop of The World * Tis Where I Find Your Poetic Beauty * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carrie * Amid The Most Enchanting of Splendours Verse * What Bird Nor Life Would Never Dance In Joy * When Beholding Such Beauty * Truth Be Told * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *