Top of the Rung

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LITTLE LUCY SAYS... THE TOP OF THE RUNG If you want to better yourself to climbing the corporate ladder, They call it a promotion, But if you reach the top of the ladder, Would there be a reason to be any better? Date: 09/01/2019

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2019 8:51:00 AM

Hmm...i've digested your words, including the final question, William...and I believe that arriving at the top requires even more work in order to retain that position; it's so easy to fall off the perch! Regards // paul

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/2/2019 9:04:00 AM

Yes, as there is always room at the top, ergo, one must strive to maintain, especially for those who made the climb knows there's always wolves just behind waiting in the delicate wings. ~ Aloha always William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2019 10:38:00 PM

Great food for thought and adorable picture of that baby. I would love to gets my hands on him. ; ) xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/1/2019 10:53:00 PM

Hehe Get let's get um.