Top of the List

Let there be no shame in a struggle to the top
For everyone who is achieving is not being a fop,
But expending the effort to be the best they can
It means climbing further upward again and again.

Do not be jealous of those at the top of the list
For they had goals you may’ve, heretofore, missed,
Consider them excellent examples of fortitude
And do not upon their fine successes intrude.

Congratulate and encourage those on the ladder
Above or below you, it really doesn’t matter,
Everyone reaches the summit at his or her own pace
What’s really important is doing so with verve and grace.

Written December 1, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/1/2021 11:37:00 PM
Why do we not know this "Everyone reaches the summit at his or her own pace" - why do we not remember this? Well penned Hank.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/2/2021 9:17:00 AM
IDK, Caren, but I know it's true!
Date: 12/1/2021 5:19:00 PM
I'm not sure about the 'grace.' What I do know is the 99% perspiration... Off to the shower I go, 'Italian-style,' i.e., two sprays of right guard under each arm and... well I'll spare you. Smiles, gw
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/1/2021 5:56:00 PM
Please do, gw. I'm glad you were "moved" by my poem! Happy Chanakah!
Date: 12/1/2021 2:56:00 PM
I caught your drift. It does take time to climb a ladder, and I’ve gotten choosier about which ones I climb.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/1/2021 4:28:00 PM
I'm glad you did, Jenna. I am with you on this one, certainly agreeing. Your comment is well-taken!
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