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Top Neanderthal

A happy life is not available to all Circumstances determine who's invited to the ball The successful ones Are ones with strong lungs Saying, “Look at me! I'm your top neanderthal!”

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/13/2018 1:24:00 AM

Finally, a word that rhymes with my Last name! ;) I get your message here...to be successful, you need to be beautiful and REALLY LOUD. lol Love this one. Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/13/2018 6:15:00 AM

LOL!!! BUT I'm sure it's not fitting Miss Laura!!! LOUD??? SENDING YOU MY LOVE SWEET THING!!! Happy Jack XOX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/9/2018 6:45:00 AM

When you look around the world , you have to count your blessings sometimes. Neanderthals had a good time , pick any filly you want, bit hairy though were'nt they lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/9/2018 6:58:00 AM

HOLY CRAP!!! The pick of the crop, so to speak!!! WOO WOO!!!

Silent One

Date: 3/9/2018 6:40:00 AM

Are we invited to the ball cinderella?

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/9/2018 6:44:00 AM

Most definitely!!! But you must wear a pretty pink frilly gown! Okay?