Tooth Ache

My jaw
Is sore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mister Roboto Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Dang, I'm with ya' on this one. I got a bad one. :) Looking for DAISY CHain! The title reminds me of Pink Floyd. "The lunatic is on the path....
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 9:11 PM
Hey, I see you have lots more here. Now I gotta keep seeing them. Where are you from? This one does not rhyme for me, so I am wondering if you are from England?? (or maybe New Jersey???)New JORYsee I think is what they say there!
K. Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:29 AM
HI Nick! Oh! I hope it feels better soon ;)! Seriously, very nice footle :) and oops---sorry about that, didn't mean to it to be such a shock...if you want the happier version, please feel free to check out 20:10 -- http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=195688 hope this would be more your cup of tea ;) thanks --nikko :)
Tideswell Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 7:59 AM
LOL, great footle. Good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
A   Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 11:09 AM
lol funny one..P.D.
Mehta Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 5:14 AM
Nice one. Good luck in the contest
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace