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Took a Walk

i took a walk outside see what i could see wonder in my eyes ..people watching me.. day was dark and cold autumn in the air searchin' for religion ..children stop and stare.. a king without a country a joker in the pack an ace inside my pocket ..diamond in the back.. a loner on the street lost-among the found i'm on a distant corner ..only one around..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 8/29/2018 1:25:00 PM
Love the imagery. Well done!
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Date: 8/29/2018 9:22:00 AM
Love that line - Lost among the found.
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Date: 8/27/2018 7:56:00 PM
Great poem! I like the lines "a loner on the street lost-among the found"
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:29:00 AM
Brilliant.
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