Took a Walk

i took a walk outside
see what i could see
wonder in my eyes
..people watching me..

day was dark and cold
autumn in the air
searchin' for religion
..children stop and stare..

a king without a country
a joker in the pack
an ace inside my pocket
..diamond in the back..

a loner on the street
lost-among the found
i'm on a distant corner
..only one around..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 8/29/2018 1:25:00 PM
Love the imagery. Well done!
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Date: 8/29/2018 9:22:00 AM
Love that line - Lost among the found.
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Date: 8/27/2018 7:56:00 PM
Great poem! I like the lines "a loner on the street lost-among the found"
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:29:00 AM
Brilliant.
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