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Too Young to Have Fun

  	An elder berry said to one who was blue
           “My lad, is there something you rue’

	The youngster replied, “I haven’t a clue” 
           “Let us partake of this here rabbit stew 

         ‘Capital idea,’ thus Sir Elderberry, 
            ‘I hear tell it’s an excellent brew.’ 

        “That’s the whole problem,” replied ‘Mr. Blue’
           “I’m only 12, too young to drink, Elderberry ~ unlike you
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