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Too Much Ale

im lying face down in the street it seems i tripped over my feet i think it was the ale that caused my epic fail ill just sleep here on the concrete

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Date: 1/13/2020 9:53:00 PM
Well penned, Timothy. Want a pillow?
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/14/2020 1:26:00 PM
THAT WOULD HELP!
Date: 1/10/2020 12:41:00 PM
Pleasant dreams on that concrete... Hope it's good for what ails you! ~ gw
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/10/2020 8:21:00 PM
Funny!
Date: 1/10/2020 2:27:00 AM
Hope it was worth it, hard landing, throbbing head guaranteed lol
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/10/2020 8:21:00 PM
Yes!
Date: 1/9/2020 11:40:00 PM
Hello Timothy … the safest place when you're in that state - catch you soon Timothy - Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/10/2020 8:21:00 PM
that is right!

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