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Too Much

I like talking to you too much the way you think and dream and dare I like talking to you too much drawn like a flame pulls in air I like talking to you too much your depth and passion and charm I like talking to you too much unexpected wind the Chinook disarms I like talking to you too much spinning in your smile, catching in your laugh I like talking to you too much momentum of a wave caught in a photograph I like talking to you too much fingertips scrape for more but I'm talking to you too much even if it's only a whisper under the door

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Date: 10/28/2016 12:02:00 PM
I loved this, it really hit home for me, I can certainly relate. Very nicely done.
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Krystal Cochrane
Date: 10/28/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thank you. I'm happy someone can relate :)
Date: 10/27/2016 8:25:00 AM
Lovely sweeps of rhythms, hinting of epic grand adventures. Thx much for sharing here, and over my way, talking under the on-line door. Gerald Oliver
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Krystal Cochrane
Date: 10/28/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thank you Gerald :)