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Too Many Video Games

red tempers lizard brains come forth rage too many video games Written 5-19-2022 Contest: Naani Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Label Verse

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Date: 5/27/2022 10:37:00 AM
Caren, congratulations, on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Blessings my friend
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/28/2022 12:47:00 PM
Thank you Eve. It was a pleasant surprise.
Date: 5/25/2022 12:06:00 PM
Wonderful Caren. The violence of video games spills over into reality too often all for money! I think every parent should post this on their bathroom mirror as a reminder to be vigilant with their children's exposure to these violent influences that muddy the line between fantasy and reality for many kids - and people. And, even though your poem dealt with a true problem, you dealt with the theme with delicacy. Congratulations on your win! Short, sweet and to the point! Blessings.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/28/2022 12:48:00 PM
Thank you Sam
Date: 5/25/2022 9:35:00 AM
No comparison, indeed! Congratulations!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/25/2022 10:03:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/24/2022 5:54:00 AM
I can relate, my teenage son is hooked on video games. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/24/2022 6:38:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/23/2022 4:07:00 PM
Always so clever~congratulations on your win in the contest! :)Paulette
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/24/2022 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Paulette
Date: 5/23/2022 2:26:00 PM
Very nicely penned Caren, Congrats on your win
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/24/2022 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Joseph
Date: 5/23/2022 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Too Many Video Games" is a great write. Love It~So True. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/24/2022 6:38:00 AM
It is so true
Date: 5/23/2022 1:11:00 PM
Like Gershon, I sure do agree too. WELL DONE and big congrats, my friend.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/24/2022 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 5/19/2022 6:42:00 PM
Agreed!! :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/20/2022 1:54:00 AM
I think they cause children to develop enraged and angry feelings; because they no longer interact or play with children physically or enjoy being outdoors -running, roller skating, or riding a bike.

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