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Too Many Video Games

red tempers
lizard brains come forth
rage
too many video games


Written 5-19-2022
Contest: Naani Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Label Verse

3rd grade4th grade5thverse

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Eve Roper

May 27, 2022 at 10:37 AM

Caren, congratulations, on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Blessings my friend

Caren Krutsinger

May 28, 2022 at 12:47 PM

Thank you Eve. It was a pleasant surprise.

Sam Kauffman

May 25, 2022 at 12:06 PM

Wonderful Caren. The violence of video games spills over into reality too often all for money! I think every parent should post this on their bathroom mirror as a reminder to be vigilant with their children's exposure to these violent influences that muddy the line between fantasy and reality for many kids - and people. And, even though your poem dealt with a true problem, you dealt with the theme with delicacy. Congratulations on your win! Short, sweet and to the point! Blessings.

Caren Krutsinger

May 28, 2022 at 12:48 PM

Thank you Sam

Christuraj Alex

May 25, 2022 at 9:35 AM

No comparison, indeed! Congratulations!

Caren Krutsinger

May 25, 2022 at 10:03 AM

Thank you!

Jo Chamberlain

May 24, 2022 at 5:54 AM

I can relate, my teenage son is hooked on video games. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Caren Krutsinger

May 24, 2022 at 6:38 AM

Thank you

Paulette Calasibetta

May 23, 2022 at 4:07 PM

Always so clever~congratulations on your win in the contest! :)Paulette

Caren Krutsinger

May 24, 2022 at 6:38 AM

Thank you Paulette

Joseph May

May 23, 2022 at 2:26 PM

Very nicely penned Caren, Congrats on your win

Caren Krutsinger

May 24, 2022 at 6:38 AM

Thank you Joseph

Paula Goldsmith

May 23, 2022 at 1:15 PM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Too Many Video Games" is a great write. Love It~So True. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Caren Krutsinger

May 24, 2022 at 6:38 AM

It is so true

Andrea Dietrich

May 23, 2022 at 1:11 PM

Like Gershon, I sure do agree too. WELL DONE and big congrats, my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

May 24, 2022 at 6:38 AM

Thank you Andrea

Gershon Wolf

May 19, 2022 at 6:42 PM

Agreed!! :)

Caren Krutsinger

May 20, 2022 at 1:54 AM

I think they cause children to develop enraged and angry feelings; because they no longer interact or play with children physically or enjoy being outdoors -running, roller skating, or riding a bike.

Too Many Video Games

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