Too Many Sweets
i jammed my tummy full of tons of goods:
sweeters, bakeys, taffy trunks..
i stuffed my tumm with so many foods,
i ended up spewing chunks.
oh, my sugary, candy-filled vomit,
you were much better going in it than coming back out it.
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