Too Many People

it is hard to breath
 all the free space earth once had...
   now packed to the max





5/31/2019
Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu Poetry Contest
sponsored by Dear Heart
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Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Congrats on your win, Early Jae
La France Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 11:16 AM
EJ congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~
Jae Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Thanks so much! I look forward to your next contest!!
Rose  Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 6:14 AM
Well done Early Jae
Jae Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thank you!
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