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Too Many Mixed Up Cans

Benican said he could, Jerrican was quite full, Pellican catch a fish, Jellican wobble in a dish, Daisican grow a flower, Wellican provide a shower, Barbican cut your hair, Terrican eat a pear, Jonican throw a lance, Cancan is an exciting dance, Billican boil some tea, Would you sit and have some with me, ..............can you?................

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Date: 3/30/2015 6:32:00 PM
G'day John... quite amusing John and original. A friend of mine and I once contemplated writing a poem about a place called buggery. Hot as buggery, wet as buggery; high as buggery etc. We didn't get around to it but you might. Thank you John - Lindsay
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John Williams
Date: 3/30/2015 7:04:00 PM
Hello Lindsay, This was experimental poetry. I wasn't too sure how it would go down. It looks like it might work. I will take your thoughts on board but only if you're absolutely sure you don.t want to do it yourself. Thanks Lindsay-John
Date: 3/30/2015 6:08:00 PM
Sure can...i just need to catch the next flight...:) A fun write...Kim:)
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Date: 3/30/2015 7:09:00 PM
It's a long way Kim, but I do make a nice cup. Thank you for reading my poem & a clever comment. Kind regards---John

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