Too Many Cooks

If a broth can be spoiled 
By too many cooks
That advice can, as well, be applied
To a patient consulting 
With too many docs
To determine what problem's inside.

Each one hopes he can help 
But conflicting reports 
Put the questioner into a tizzy
And the tests and the labs 
And the visits combine
To add one more new symptom - that's dizzy.

Frustration and pain, though,
In tandem, demand
A solution that might not be easy.
Still, stepping on somebody's
Toes may result
In discomfort that borders on queasy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 1:48 PM
- Too many "cooks" !!! ... frustration is in itself at times quite painful ... everything takes so long ... waiting for answers ... yes, dizzy... very dizzy ... and "helpless naked" - I hope all is well with you, Ilene - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 12:55 PM
Hope everything is ok Ilene, I can relate as when hubby was diagnosed with cancer we had 3 courses of treatment available each doctor was confident theirs was the best option - we went down the surgery line as the other 2 treatments didn't give hubby a second bite of the cherry so to speak and we were lucky as 5 years down the line he needed radiation treatment but all is good now:-) hugs Jan xx
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