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Too High A Price "A pleasured life, too short a measure, a treasure that's too high a price..." A photograph in blues unveils a vacuous 2009 look of the devout and one who intervened with her faith asked, "Was I wrong?, she whispered, "You were my gift." too high a price... and to that, her smile draped in azure, gleamed for a few days more, Pastor, composer, musician, singer--parts to a prefaced Word spills to a floor, for a church that wants more too high a price... not to share with her extended family and her own, a church clears all into their hearts and enriching lives all shined in the intricacies of sapphire, Her life well worth all of Earth's treasures, yet to garner a touch, a smile, rend mixed feelings of pain and joy, of her mortal soul that turned a memorable blue too high a price... for me to bear, being on my own. ***In her final years, she forgot who I was, in her finals days, she remembers me, in her finals hours, she finds her peace, as I began my journey to find mines... 2019 September 11 *GRAND Prize* THE CONTEST OF ALL CONTEST ~~William Kekaula

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Date: 10/3/2019 5:43:00 PM
William congratulations on your win in my challenge with this wonderful write and what a great photo and music !
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Date: 10/3/2019 5:55:00 PM
Thanks, Constance for sharing this ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/12/2019 11:10:00 AM
Not fair... just simply not fair. No one said it was suppose to be, but proper amount of attention should be paid to the fact, "not fair"!!! I loved this poem. Prayers your way. Hugs. Ann (you will be fine, she is still with you, her heart must have been enormous)
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Date: 9/12/2019 11:22:00 AM
Ah! Righteous! Ma saw half of her kids pass and I've seen all of my family pass for I am the last of 4 bloodlines/generations--I am ready, please--not before my own ~ Aloha always, William

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