Too Good To Ever Last Song Version

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Music and vocals by Vadim Chelnokov an amazing composer/producer

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Too good - to ever last    

Vs1
When we first met, I never thought
that you could ever love me...
You were the brightest star shining
so high up above me...


Bridge 
I loved the way you stared, with your sparkling eyes...
I loved the way you laughed, out loud until you cried...
I loved the way you moved, with such grace and finesse...
I loved the words you used, the way you'd catch your breath...


Chorus
Guess it was too good... to ever last
I knew the end was coming... but not so fast
I thought the good times... just might be enough...
I guess you got tired ...of my simple love


Vs2
I remember when you said our first kiss
gave you the shivers...
And every time that we made love,
I'd watch you gently quiver


Bridge 
I loved the way you stared, with your sparkling eyes...
I loved the way you laughed, out loud until you cried...
I loved the way you moved, with such grace and finesse...
I loved the words you used, the way you'd catch your breath..


Chorus
Guess it was too good... to ever last
I knew the end was coming, but not so fast
I thought the good times, just might be enough...
I guess you got tired ...of my simple love


Postlude
Now in the heart of the night,
nightmares fade from view
Sometimes when I find peace of mind
I still... dream of you



December 4,2019
Music and vocals added 
September 23,2021
John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 11/1/2021 1:37:00 AM
Amazing song, John, love the beat and the upbeat tone of it though the lyrics are a little sad:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/15/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Jo glad you liked it enough to comment. Sorry the late response I've been away for a while.
Date: 9/26/2021 6:55:00 PM
I like the lyrics to this one more than the last, John. I feel more sad sentiment in the lines of the postlude. Beautifully expressed.
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/28/2021 3:52:00 PM
Thanks Jenna, you never mentioned the song, do you like it?
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