Too Desperate For My Blood

Coming up with this poem was difficult for me
I even nodded off dreaming of Grandma Juanita’s cinnamon rolls
Now I’ve returned to continue with pen
How alive is this new venue I’m in
Outside my bedroom

Loot as a tool -
Too desperate for my blood
Foul eyes dismiss the true you within

“When you reach the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on” 
Says the USA’s sixteenth president
Many guys and their lies deceive with surprise and when we see it with our eyes a piece of us dies
That’s if they’re close to us

Wake up everybody!
Why are you asleep? You shouldn’t be slumbering!

So you’re not desperate or fraught, just anxious and distressed?
Numerous phonetics but in spite of everything they’re synonymous

When only using your eyes, you’ll assume that having what somebody else has will make you happy
This is when you no longer trust in yourself, are desperate and are running on empty
This turns our souls into rust

In my survival I need not be reliant	but dependent upon myself

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/21/2012 11:36:00 AM
I am compelled and completely in love with you my friend
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Date: 6/21/2012 11:45:00 AM
WOOOW seeing a comment like this from an EXTRAORDINARILY AMAZING poet..... it feels really good :D
Date: 6/11/2012 9:43:00 PM
amazing write, well so are the rest of yours :3 i really like how you dont rhyme everything, but your flow simply rolls off the tounge, and thanks for the comment on my newness poem, it made me smile :)
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Date: 6/6/2012 3:40:00 AM
BEAUTY-FULLY PUT TOGETHER IS WAT THIS POEM IS...
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Date: 6/4/2012 9:54:00 PM
TRUTH SEES TRUTH AND I SEE MUCH OF TRUTH IN YOU BECAUSE ITS IN ME TO........WONDERFUL POEM.FABULOUS!!!!!
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Date: 6/4/2012 8:22:00 AM
Yes, indeed - words of wisdom here, Brittany
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Date: 6/3/2012 12:28:00 PM
This is one great piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read (Color Me ) Lucilla
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Date: 6/2/2012 3:05:00 PM
Beauty indeed my dear sweet Brittany. Well written piece. Hugs Michael
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Date: 6/2/2012 6:55:00 PM
Thx Michael <3
Date: 6/2/2012 2:14:00 PM
This is so true Brittany..love the reality check!!
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Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/2/2012 2:20:00 PM
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