Too Desperate For My Blood

Coming up with this poem was difficult for me
I even nodded off dreaming of Grandma Juanita’s cinnamon rolls
Now I’ve returned to continue with pen
How alive is this new venue I’m in
Outside my bedroom

Loot as a tool -
Too desperate for my blood
Foul eyes dismiss the true you within

“When you reach the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on” 
Says the USA’s sixteenth president
Many guys and their lies deceive with surprise and when we see it with our eyes a piece of us dies
That’s if they’re close to us

Wake up everybody!
Why are you asleep? You shouldn’t be slumbering!

So you’re not desperate or fraught, just anxious and distressed?
Numerous phonetics but in spite of everything they’re synonymous

When only using your eyes, you’ll assume that having what somebody else has will make you happy
This is when you no longer trust in yourself, are desperate and are running on empty
This turns our souls into rust

In my survival I need not be reliant	but dependent upon myself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 21, 2012 at 11:36 AM
I am compelled and completely in love with you my friend
Britt Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 11:45 AM
WOOOW seeing a comment like this from an EXTRAORDINARILY AMAZING poet..... it feels really good :D
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June 11, 2012 at 9:43 PM
amazing write, well so are the rest of yours :3 i really like how you dont rhyme everything, but your flow simply rolls off the tounge, and thanks for the comment on my newness poem, it made me smile :)
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June 6, 2012 at 3:40 AM
BEAUTY-FULLY PUT TOGETHER IS WAT THIS POEM IS...
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June 4, 2012 at 9:54 PM
TRUTH SEES TRUTH AND I SEE MUCH OF TRUTH IN YOU BECAUSE ITS IN ME TO........WONDERFUL POEM.FABULOUS!!!!!
Horne Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Yes, indeed - words of wisdom here, Brittany
Carrillo Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 12:28 PM
This is one great piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read (Color Me ) Lucilla
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June 2, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Beauty indeed my dear sweet Brittany. Well written piece. Hugs Michael
Britt Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 6:55 PM
Thx Michael <3
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June 2, 2012 at 2:14 PM
This is so true Brittany..love the reality check!!
Britt Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 2:20 PM
:D
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