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Too Comatose To See

inextinguishable
is your appetency
for what you suspire

you feed on this drug
to make life passable
but by the same line
that educes endurance
it will transport
inevitable death


Dec 10. 2019
If you Live by the sword, you die by the sword poetry contest
Sponsored by Silent one

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Charles Messina Date: 12/16/2019 4:59:00 PM Love this Sandra. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/16/2019 7:11:00 PM Thank you so much Charlie :) hugs

Chris Green Date: 12/16/2019 8:00:00 AM This one should have been at the top, but I am not the judge just a big fan. :) Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/16/2019 9:38:00 AM Thank you so much Chris... hugs

Eve Roper Date: 12/15/2019 7:13:00 PM Sandra, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/15/2019 8:01:00 PM thank you Eve... hugs

Na Na Date: 12/15/2019 5:28:00 PM Well done on getting a winning poem :)~ Sandra Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/15/2019 6:07:00 PM Thanks Greg...hugs

Silent One Date: 12/15/2019 4:34:00 PM indeed it will.. you are right.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/15/2019 5:00:00 PM thank you S.O. for hosting the contest and my placement... hugs

Jeff Connelly Date: 12/10/2019 9:25:00 PM Words to die for Sandra. Brilliant!!! Thank you. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/11/2019 10:11:00 AM Thank you so much Jeff...it's the one thing that makes many feel so great about life while it kills them blindly... hugs

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/10/2019 5:57:00 PM We are dying every second... ~ Introduction to a Philosophy of Life Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 6:46:00 PM so very true Gershon... hugs!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/10/2019 12:35:00 PM I can feel the frustration in this write. So clever Sandra! Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 6:46:00 PM you get attached to the kids, as you know, they become your kids too as you watch them grow, so their death affects you too...sad world... thank you my friend... hugs

Beautiful Scars Date: 12/10/2019 11:09:00 AM oh my word, I read this 4 times and each time I felt a different emotion. Amazing and a winner for sure sweet lady! x:)-luloo Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 12:09:00 PM Thank you so much my beautiful friend... hugs :)

Robertina B. Date: 12/10/2019 11:02:00 AM A deep and profound write, my friend.. Your talent shines!! Enjoyed this! An amazing write.. Have a blessed day.. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 12:08:00 PM Thank you so much my friend :) you have a wonderful day as well... hugs

Running Wolves Date: 12/10/2019 10:57:00 AM Oh my, sounds like coke and I don't mean cola. Of course I'm usually wrong but, I get over it lol. Recovery for me is a many splendored thing... I'm gonna need a dictionary too....Bwahahahaha Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 11:56:00 AM could be any drug they choose pretty much...some kill faster than others though...

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/10/2019 10:49:00 AM Very well said and so sad is true life’s tale. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 11:55:00 AM Thank you Kim...i know of too many to list...to watch children grow into adults is wonderful, but to see them fall so young is heartbreaking... hugs

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2019 10:36:00 AM Very deep my friend--that which inspires can sometimes be harmful--but not always obvious. Well said, Sandy--best for a TOP win. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 11:53:00 AM Thank you so much Vijay...i am not so sure about a top spot but it came to me today so i wrote it... i appreciate your vote of confidence my friend... hugs

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/10/2019 10:18:00 AM I totally agree w/Chris ... this is some kinda potent muse elixir, Sandra! Your quill thoughts opens a third eye to ink see. Powerful poem per usual from your talented pen. Love and smiles and smiles of joy always. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 10:26:00 AM Thank you so much Freddie... sometimes they are too out of it to realize that what makes them feel powerful will also knock them down eventually... hugs Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/10/2019 10:19:00 AM Btw ... Great title too! Love and peace forever.

Chris Green Date: 12/10/2019 10:09:00 AM One of the best I have seen for this contest. Short but direct, a deep message that is definitely understood. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Another amazing write from your magical pen. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 10:16:00 AM Thank you Chris, you kindness is appreciated my friend... it seems to be an epidemic and i know it has hit this area hard.. so many kids i have driven have crossed that line...i think the police told us there are a minimum of three a day some they save some they don't, but the addict even seeing this doesn't realize it could happen to them... sadly... hugs :)