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Too Comatose To See

inextinguishable is your appetency for what you suspire you feed on this drug to make life passable but by the same line that educes endurance it will transport inevitable death Dec 10. 2019 If you Live by the sword, you die by the sword poetry contest Sponsored by Silent one

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Charles Messina

Date: 12/16/2019 4:59:00 PM

Love this Sandra. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Charlie :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/16/2019 8:00:00 AM

This one should have been at the top, but I am not the judge just a big fan. :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 9:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris... hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 12/15/2019 7:13:00 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/15/2019 8:01:00 PM

thank you Eve... hugs

Na Na

Date: 12/15/2019 5:28:00 PM

Well done on getting a winning poem :)~ Sandra

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/15/2019 6:07:00 PM

Thanks Greg...hugs

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2019 4:34:00 PM

indeed it will.. you are right.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/15/2019 5:00:00 PM

thank you S.O. for hosting the contest and my placement... hugs

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/10/2019 9:25:00 PM

Words to die for Sandra. Brilliant!!! Thank you.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 10:11:00 AM

Thank you so much Jeff...it's the one thing that makes many feel so great about life while it kills them blindly... hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/10/2019 5:57:00 PM

We are dying every second... ~ Introduction to a Philosophy of Life

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:46:00 PM

so very true Gershon... hugs!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/10/2019 12:35:00 PM

I can feel the frustration in this write. So clever Sandra!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:46:00 PM

you get attached to the kids, as you know, they become your kids too as you watch them grow, so their death affects you too...sad world... thank you my friend... hugs

Lu Loo

Date: 12/10/2019 11:09:00 AM

oh my word, I read this 4 times and each time I felt a different emotion. Amazing and a winner for sure sweet lady! x:)-luloo

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 12:09:00 PM

Thank you so much my beautiful friend... hugs :)

Robertina B.

Date: 12/10/2019 11:02:00 AM

A deep and profound write, my friend.. Your talent shines!! Enjoyed this! An amazing write.. Have a blessed day..

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 12:08:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend :) you have a wonderful day as well... hugs

Running Wolves

Date: 12/10/2019 10:57:00 AM

Oh my, sounds like coke and I don't mean cola. Of course I'm usually wrong but, I get over it lol. Recovery for me is a many splendored thing... I'm gonna need a dictionary too....Bwahahahaha

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 11:56:00 AM

could be any drug they choose pretty much...some kill faster than others though...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/10/2019 10:49:00 AM

Very well said and so sad is true life’s tale.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 11:55:00 AM

Thank you Kim...i know of too many to list...to watch children grow into adults is wonderful, but to see them fall so young is heartbreaking... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/10/2019 10:36:00 AM

Very deep my friend--that which inspires can sometimes be harmful--but not always obvious. Well said, Sandy--best for a TOP win.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 11:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay...i am not so sure about a top spot but it came to me today so i wrote it... i appreciate your vote of confidence my friend... hugs

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/10/2019 10:18:00 AM

I totally agree w/Chris ... this is some kinda potent muse elixir, Sandra! Your quill thoughts opens a third eye to ink see. Powerful poem per usual from your talented pen. Love and smiles and smiles of joy always.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Freddie... sometimes they are too out of it to realize that what makes them feel powerful will also knock them down eventually... hugs

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/10/2019 10:19:00 AM

Btw ... Great title too! Love and peace forever.

Chris Green

Date: 12/10/2019 10:09:00 AM

One of the best I have seen for this contest. Short but direct, a deep message that is definitely understood. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Another amazing write from your magical pen.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Chris, you kindness is appreciated my friend... it seems to be an epidemic and i know it has hit this area hard.. so many kids i have driven have crossed that line...i think the police told us there are a minimum of three a day some they save some they don't, but the addict even seeing this doesn't realize it could happen to them... sadly... hugs :)