Too Alien

too alien in my world, too silent to speak.
too beautiful to touch your scarlet cheek 
Every moment, your love and smile I miss. 
As I breathe your air in ethereal reminisce,    





Dated 28th May 2019
Submitted to Arbitrium Divisa contest 
Sponsor	Gregory R Barden
Original reference poem: Ethereal Reminisce written on 24th May 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 5:54 PM
This is lovely and poignant. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 9:50 AM
Back with congrats on your win, Debjani.
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Truly lovely, Debjani.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 8:52 PM
That last line is captivatingly sensual if you truly READ it. Wow! Exquisite!
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