Don Johnson Poet Ballade

Tony Mate

Tony Mate, 

i spent years writing poetry without feedback, 

A little feedback feeds the soul,
the longing to be wanted, 
makes us whole,
contentment comes,
when you are appreciated,
lifted spirits to elated, 
ego satisfied, created,
this story telling Mole, 
sits on the public poetry pole, 
elated....

You do write my kind of poetry mate, and i make my dumb comments on it,
you are appreciated mate!!!  Don     

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Tony Lane October 1, 2011 at 11:54 AM Thanks Don. You know what I think of your work. Looks like I'm not the only one. Tony

John Smith September 30, 2011 at 11:57 PM It's hard to write a poem to nobody. Even if all I get is, "Nice try;" it's better than an echo. Always enjoy yours.

Nancy Jones September 30, 2011 at 9:51 PM preesh ya... botha ya.. muchly! Beautiness~N Don Johnson September 30, 2011 at 10:45 PM On ya sweetest Nancy Jones, let em bloody hold the phone, loves ya babe, does this bag o bones, says the poor old johnson...

Sara Kendrick September 30, 2011 at 6:40 PM Enjoyed the creative work here..Yes, the feedback lifts my spirits..The fact that you understood what I had just written made my day..My husband or son would not have understood it at all..Thanks..Sara

Poet Destroyer A September 30, 2011 at 6:23 PM you're a great man thank you p d Don Johnson September 30, 2011 at 6:25 PM No mate just a dumb word botherer:)