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Tonn Chliodhna

Tonn Chliodhna My lover haunts here, he hears me plead with each ninth wave, I break and bleed. I left Tir Tairngine, for Ciabhad’s love, jealous MacLir would intercede That deity in vengeance wrought a spell borne from his lust and greed. Lulled asleep, and wrapped in waves I drowned in the harbor of Glandore sea. I search for signs of Ciabhad, although I’ve died, I am not freed Each ninth wave, my grieving peaks I stack my height and gather speed, white capped waves of Goddess fists hurl viciously both wood and weed. My fingers clutch the shoreline sand, and drag debris as I recede. I sift through kelp, through shells and stone and yet I know, I shan’t succeed. Banshee laments pierce the wind, split every stone and every weed. I am Chliodhna, I’ve lost my love; with each ninth wave, I break, and bleed.

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Date: 2/21/2024 2:18:00 AM
no clue how to pronounce these gaelic words but hey , love it , write more
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Date: 2/20/2024 5:33:00 PM
This is quite interesting lacey. Not familiar with the references but it's cool poetic folklore. Aye
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Lacey Jones
Date: 2/20/2024 7:36:00 PM
Hi Tom! Thank you for reading and commenting! I got the inspiration while doing some research on Gaelic gods and goddesses, and Chliohdna was mentioned a few times. Down the rabbit holes I went and came back with this ghazal.

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