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Tonight's Sunset

That splash of pink
   in the sky
persistantly
   draws my eye.
The setting sun,
   the waning day,
daylight quickly
   slides away.
A last gift
   before it goes,
the pastel mural
   the sky now shows.





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Hicks Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 1:00 AM
It's at times like these I wish I was one of those people that always carry a camera with them. At the very least there is poetry... lol. Delightful little piece... I enjoyed it's easy-going-ness... and thanks for reading my haiku this morning. It was much appreciated :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 11:41 PM
Saw the picture that went with it this time. Sure do like this poem seeing it again.
Horne Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:06 PM
truly beautiful write here, Francine
Bauer Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 1:28 PM
very lovely, francine, and wonderful use of rhyme!
Ryerson Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Wish I could have seen that sunset!...Beautiful poem, Francine - Tim
Poet Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:37 AM
An amazing sunset you have painted here Francine!Lovely read.
Horsman Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 6:14 AM
this is a lovely visual poem, Francine, enjoyed...
Wilson Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:48 AM
oh how lovely it sounds ! Well done Francine...love,Deb
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 10:31 PM
I wish I had seen it as well. How wonderful, Francine.
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