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TONIGHTS MOON

Full Moon floating here Residing calmly tonight Nightmares impending ??????? ????????????? ????????

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Date: 10/6/2013 2:02:00 PM
I must admit I am a bit puzzled by this one --- (not that poetry isn't supposed to be mystifying, mind you) --- but the juxtaposition of metaphors seem to clash so harshly and abruptly.. Is that what you intended? I think this poem is effective in the way that it might leave the reader questioning afterwards... so does that account for all the question marks at the end, or are you confused about your own poem?
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